My Name
I’m annoyed by my first name,
Every time I’m met with the same,
A corny joke,
It makes my head smoke!
I think it is totally lame.
My middle name’s not all that bad,
It was the name of my dad’s dad.
I hear he was a serious man,
My dad was his biggest fan.
I think the name James is rad.
My middle name would’ve been Mercury,
He was a messenger, always in a hurry.
My parents realized it would be weird,
When one friend interfered.
He was known for calming others fury.
My last name comes from a town in Germany.
Surrounded by forests imbued with fervency,
Started in the days of monarchy,
When king was head of the hierarchy.
Yet my name does have a harmony.
My family has a tradition of initials,
Our initials spell out words, mine spell agile.
Our personalities are unremitting,
We unfortunately, keep forgetting.
I have to admit, it’s sometimes beneficial.
i liked the rhyming!!!!!!! GO ANAKIN!!! :D
ReplyDeleteOhhhh and your name is a good name!! i like it
DeleteI really like how you talked about your grandpa and the history of your name. It was such a great poem!(:
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome I didnt know your last name was a town in germany, how cool.
ReplyDeleteThe words you rhymed were very interesting! I'm not sure if i would have thought to use words like t you did ! Creative!
ReplyDeleteBIG WORDS
ReplyDeletethe rhymes were all like goood and stuff loved em! you are so cool lil dude keep up the good work and love your name because that means you love yourself :)
ReplyDeleteI loved the ryhming in the poem! It was great! And by the way I like the name "Anakin." :)
ReplyDeleteThat was really nice. I liked how you described where each name came from and stated your opinions about youre name.
ReplyDeleteWooww that was really good!! I loved how you included your father and his father.. I liked it so much!!
ReplyDeleteAn akin,
ReplyDeleteI love that you used a limerick for you poetic form! Great job and great rhymes.
I liked how you made a rhyme scheme with it and how you used words that were big. your poem was great
ReplyDeleteI liked that you did not just use your first name, but explained all of them. That, and you explained how you were named and the changes that occured, plus why they named you as such.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you rhymed. The middle name Mercury would have been awesome though. Great job and AWKWARD CLOSENESS.
ReplyDeleteI like how you started off saying how you did like your name, but then continued on to your actual feelings and details. And I also like your rhyme scheme. Nice (:
ReplyDeleteamazing job!I liked the words that you used
ReplyDeleteawesome rhyming poem :)
ReplyDeletethe rhyming was great a poem
ReplyDeleteCool rhyme scheme and the different tone to the poem was cool too.
ReplyDeleteWow! I didn't know you had it in ya!
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome Anakin!
You're deff my liddo buddy, I'm proud of you, you did very well!
The rhyming was exciting! :)
I like yours it was alot of detail all raped up in one. I love your rhythm and I enjoyed your sense of humor. Great Job Anakin :))))))))
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